GISBORNE HERALD ARTICLE .

ANZAC writing.

What would it be like if we were at war? 

Waihirere watched a short Youtube clip and then constructed these poems. 
ENJOY!

WALHT: write a poem using our senses.

We can include:   What


Our model.

Ko wai au?

In term one, our kaupapanui was "Ko wai au?" Who am I? 

Take a look at some of our mahi.

Procedural Text

This term, we have been learning to write procedural texts.


WALHT: Write a procedural text.

We include: 

• Materials
• Ingredients
• Method

Our method has:

• Step by step instructions
• Begins with the TIME words - First, next, after, finally, last
• Use verbs to describe WHAT to do eg. Stir, mix, spread
• DO NOT include the pronouns I or WE. You are telling the audience how to do something so use the words YOU eg. You stir the mixture.

Have a look at some of our writing.

Here it goes.....POP....POP...POP!

 

HOW TO MAKE  A POWERFUL RIVERDALE LEARNER.

Here are some more examples of procedural texts using our school values as ingredients. 

WITS movie- PB4L

What to blog?

Congratulations to those people in our class who have posted a comment on our BLOG. Ka pai koutou! 

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Have a quick think about some of your mahi that you want to post in our blog. Maybe you could put in a fantastic piece of writing you are really proud of and want to share? Or maybe a screencast of your reading?

What do you think?